19th October
I added a colour to the eyes of the school girl character. I felt that it would add more of a scary look to the magazine.
I went on to analysing this magazine for features that I could improve. First of all, I liked the font of the title, however the "wood" part of the word was faded and it wasn't that visable. I decided that I wanted this text and fading to make it look as if it is part of the image.
The next part that I decided that I needed to change was "Beaverwood School for". This is because it is on a white background and isn't that visable.
After getting feedback from classmates, I agreed with them that I have added too much text to the magazine. Seeing as there is a lot going on in the picture, the reader will focus on that instead of looking at the unwanted text on the front.
The next part that I decided that I needed to change was "Beaverwood School for". This is because it is on a white background and isn't that visable.
After getting feedback from classmates, I agreed with them that I have added too much text to the magazine. Seeing as there is a lot going on in the picture, the reader will focus on that instead of looking at the unwanted text on the front.
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