After getting feedback from other students and my teacher, I decided that there could be some improvements on my magazine.
I realised that because there was so much going on in the picture, there was no need to have so much text on the front cover.
There was also the problem of having white text on a light background. The words "Beaverwood School For" weren't very literate.
I thought that it would be better if I re-arranged and changed some of the text in order for it to be more readable.
Here is an image of my final design:
I thought that I would darkern the overall look of the magazine in order to make the colour stand out. We can clearly see the red of the blood and how it links with the text on the page. I thought it looks better now that I have removed some of the text so that the image itself is still as powerful. I think its good how I have used the text font and colour to connote the sense of death in the magazine.
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